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Alright, I'm sorry, but it honestly doesn't seem like anyone else is trying to help you out with critique, so I'll be the first.
Proportion does not exist in this picture, nor with any of your other females. They only seem to have huge, oddly-shaped busts, and when you try to implement a butt, you always make the curve from it to the thighs immediate to that the lines look awkward and painfully-bent. The elbows begin too soon and the arms in general are a lot longer than they should be. Most Sonic characters' hands only go down to their knees, at most. The hands look like they have had absolutely no effort put into drawing them, and as such, ruin the picture further. The head isn't too bad, but with the angles you've been drawing at, the muzzle is too big, and makes it look a little odd. Having the same generic expression presented in every other picture doesn't help either. The feet are interesting; they almost make it look like you're trying to combine aspects of a Sonic character with a furry character.
Honestly, I can see you having some potential, but before you can fully utilize it, you have to improve on those few things. (tl;dr version: Proportions, hands, muzzle size/angle)
And no, this isn't "hating". This is /much-needed/ criticism.
Proportion does not exist in this picture, nor with any of your other females. They only seem to have huge, oddly-shaped busts, and when you try to implement a butt, you always make the curve from it to the thighs immediate to that the lines look awkward and painfully-bent. The elbows begin too soon and the arms in general are a lot longer than they should be. Most Sonic characters' hands only go down to their knees, at most. The hands look like they have had absolutely no effort put into drawing them, and as such, ruin the picture further. The head isn't too bad, but with the angles you've been drawing at, the muzzle is too big, and makes it look a little odd. Having the same generic expression presented in every other picture doesn't help either. The feet are interesting; they almost make it look like you're trying to combine aspects of a Sonic character with a furry character.
Honestly, I can see you having some potential, but before you can fully utilize it, you have to improve on those few things. (tl;dr version: Proportions, hands, muzzle size/angle)
And no, this isn't "hating". This is /much-needed/ criticism.